the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience spelling and grammar are correct. "The film holds a" - you should add an "As of - 2013," onto this-not that the critical consensus is likely to dramatically change any time soon." allows them to eat Isabelle and Elmont" - this makes it sound like it happens, which I assume it doesn't (I haven't seen this film)-how about "gives them permission to eat."?.Two quibbles I couldn't immediately fix myself: Feel free to revert any you find objectionable. It's well written, well sourced, and appears to cover major aspects of the topic (plot, production, reception, box office, etc.). On first pass, this looks like excellent work. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! - Khazar2 ( talk) 02:11, 27 June 2013 (UTC) Initial comments Initial comments to follow in the next 1-5 days. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. This review is transcluded from Talk:Jack the Giant Slayer/GA1.
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